Thursday, November 13, 2014

My Visual Poem



Describe what your poem is about and how your visuals make an impact. My poem is about a bee out of energy. It also tells how it is hard to live a life being different than everyone else. I also think that my visuals will make an impact because you will see what is going on. You will no have to just guess what is going on.

How do your special effects make the reader feel. Ok, to be honest I don't have to many special effects. But I do have a one I can think of off the top of my head. It is of me being a bee and jumping all around with bees buzzing. I thought that was a good match.

Are you satisfied with your result. Truly, I am not. I feel that a procrastinated then was rushed. I should have added more special effects. I could have added fades and other things also. But overall it was a fun project.

28 comments:

  1. Great audio and great shots, hilarious video Haha. Maybe adjust sound in some parts, not much to fix. I really love this video it's really really funny !

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  2. That was amazing! haha
    Next time try to read it a little more smoothly.
    Great job though Miles!

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  3. I liked the B-role, it was very funny.
    You read kind of slow, and some of you B-role was not very focused.
    i liked that you dressed up for the acting... Good Job Myos!!!

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  4. Uh...Your poem was interesting.
    You had a brief moment where separate audio flowed in.
    Your B-Roll matched your poem well. Interesting work.

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    1. Hi Miles. I really liked your theme of your poem because it was something we all could relate to and you used a bee instead of a normal human. That was something really amazing. I felt you could have re-took your A-Roll because it somewhat felt you didn't practiced all that much but, there was a lot of emotion! I also really liked your B-Roll because it was very clear and that one B-Roll of you as a bee was funny. Amazing work Miles.

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  6. Great costume. Funny yet personal. Some b-roll was unnecessary. Clear voice over.

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  7. I loved how you actually had a bee costume... It matched your audio/theme really well and added some humor. One thing that could be improved is your voice-over, a bit more expression would definitely make this even better. Nice rhyme scheme and B-Roll!

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  8. Hi, nice visual poem. I really liked how there was no background noises in your original audio. one thing you can add is some quiet music. And one other thing I liked about your poem was how you dressed up in a bee costume.

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  9. I liked how it was funny. Your voiceover sounded a little choppy, and like it was being read from a paper. The b-roll matched really well with what you were saying.

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  10. Good sequencing. Could've used music to keep peoples attention. Nice acting.

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  11. Nice costume, its really funny. You pause in the voiceover right before you say the missing key. The poem was well written and funny.

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  12. This was so funny! Make sure your camera is focused and next time put music in the background. This was great love your concept and that it relates to you. VERY NICE!

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  13. Nice job Miles! The B-Roll was amazing, with the varieties of B-Roll of different scenes.
    There could be music in your poem.
    Your poem was read clearly.
    Great job Miles!
    (But hey! A Bee Costume! What a nice addition!)

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  14. - I like how you had someone dress up as a bee.
    - Maybe you could've spoken a little faster or edit out where you paused.
    - I liked how you made the whole poem rhyme.

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  15. great poem, that was funny and i like the b-roll
    se more emotion when reading the poem.
    the audio was clear. good job.

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  16. Your poem was so funny! I like your b-roll because it matches what you are talking about.You could of put some background music. Other than that great job!

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  17. Your poem was very funny, I admit, you made me laugh
    You could of added a bit more expression in your voice
    Your B-Roll and sound effects were funny and mostly matched with what you were saying.

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  18. I liked the visuals that you used. Some of your shots were out of focus. I really liked the poem that you wrote and how the visuals matched it.

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  19. I really liked your poem and the visuals you used. Your voiceover sounded like you weren't sure what you were going to say, maybe practice it next time. The visuals matched your poem well.

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  20. I like how your visuals related to what you were saying. You paused a lot when reading your poem, maybe next time try to talk more smoothly and naturally. Funny poem that was well written!

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  21. 1.) Wow, great job! I really liked how you made it humorous and also incorporated your little brother.
    2.) I think you could have read your poem more smoothly.
    3.) You did a great job with editing; the visuals matched the audio very well!

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  22. supper funny video. great translations
    If i was making this i would of made some of the clips should be shorter.
    over all i love your video and also i love the righting you did.

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  23. I liked how you got shots and clips at a lot of different places. I think that you could have used some special effects and filters. Your B-roll really matched to what I was hearing.

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  24. The video was really funny, you could of put some music, good job!

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  25. A lot of humor was in your poem.
    There could have been more sounds in the background.
    The poem overall was good, there was definitely effort put into it.

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  26. I like how your poem was funny. Who was in the bee costume?

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